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Today I live in a place called Gainesville. It's located in North Central Florida. Gainesville is home of one of the most oldest and largest universities of the state. Also, it's an attractive place for old people for it's beautiful and quite landscapes, or its nice weather. In my opinion, I don't like Gainesville because is so quite and small. It only has one mall, and a few shopping centers, restaurants, and business centers.
Before I moved here, I lived in a spectacular city called San Francisco. San Francisco is located in Central California. It has a Chinese, Japanese, and Italian town. San francisco is attractive for its beautiful landscapes, bridges, museums, streets, buildings and beaches.
Also, it has so many malls, restaurants, universities, colleges, and business in general.
Every city is different and each one of them has a special magic
posted by karen at 6:03 PM
1 Comments:
Gainesville really is very different from San Francisco. The contrasts you make are kind of general, but they do make the point about the differences between the two cities. Will you return to San Francisco after you finish at SFCC?
Here are a couple of grammar points. When you use the superlative you don't use most with the superlative form of an adjective: "Gainesville is home of one of the most oldest and largest universities of the state." It should read: "the oldest and largest."
Also, you misspell quiet by spelling it as quite. What is a quiet landscape?
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